Comments on: Fascinating Fiction Stories

By: Kodai

Kodai — Wed, 27 May 2009 12:52:30 +0000

Hi, Ms.Mongno.

My story is about a boy called Kota has had strange experience that every time new student came in this year, there names are Kazuki and he always came to be friends with them.
The problem Kota faces is that the new student who Kota thought a boy was a girl. And he starts to concern about the new student (kazuki) but one day the leader of the girls (Kanako) made Kazuki left out of the girls group. Kota would liked to help her but he couldn’t talk to her. One day Kota knew her sad experience…

By: pauline227

pauline227 — Mon, 20 Apr 2009 13:45:14 +0000

Dear Mrs. M.
I think that this blog post is a little too short but that’s Ok right?
My book is about a girl name Laura and she had trouble fitting in and also she is very shy and that make her talk less in class. So then, she talk about it with her mom and her mom gave her some advice and then the problem get solve and the after that, there was a new girl in class and then they became best friend.

By: kentaro227

kentaro227 — Mon, 20 Apr 2009 09:37:11 +0000

My story is about this boy called John who came to the Maldives and in there he met with his friend. He is scared of the ocean and when he was in the Maldives his fear came out. His friend Ken asked if John wants to snorkel with him. But John couldn’t answer. He didn’t want anyone to know that he is scared of the ocean and that he can’t swim. But because his hotel was on the water he tries him self to go in and swim. He didn’t want anyone to know what he was doing him self. But his fear came out again by the small wave made him go far away from home. After that he get noticed by Ken. They practiced everday. and that made him go in the water.

By: Jian

Jian — Mon, 20 Apr 2009 05:29:29 +0000

My story is about a girl named Isabell. Isabell
is old enough to go to school, so her mom said
you need to go to school. In school everyone is
jealous because she is rich.
She has no friends.
My character wants a friend to play with.
So a girl moved into her neighborhood and
Isabell went and said hello and their
friendship begins.

By: SooHyun

SooHyun — Mon, 20 Apr 2009 01:57:40 +0000

In my story, the main character is Dong-Gill. Dong-Gill moved to Seoul.
And he’s speaking different accent (Busan accent), so everyone didn’t come
close him. And he spoiled water to leader of boys, Joon-Pyo and he got
mad about it. But Don-Gill meets street-sweeper and he helps Dong-Gill to
get through.
My character wants to have (make) friends to talk with and play with.
And also he wants to learn Seoul accent because he knows
that If he wants to have friends, he has to learn Seoul accent.
And also he wants to be friend with
street-sweeper forever.
And Dong-Gill solves the problem to learn Seoul accent and
when class learn about other area, he taught about Busan so
everyone knew that he is kind.

By: Jungmeen

Jungmeen — Mon, 20 Apr 2009 01:52:29 +0000

Hello, Ms.Mongno.
The problem my main character(Arine) is facing is that she loses her lucky stone
and she couldn’t find it. It made her feel despair and she couldn’t
concentrate on anything like she got detention on math because she didn’t concentrate on math class because she lost it.
The other problem my main character is facing is that when she found her stone again, her enemy (Smith) threw it away so she got worse again.
Her grade got down and her stress got up.

She solved this problem by going to the counseler and ask her about her stone
and she can’t concentrate on anything except for looking for her stone
and the counseler told her that she could do anything without her stone
and she got better!

By: TJ

TJ — Mon, 20 Apr 2009 01:42:46 +0000

My character (Duke) wants the cat to stay with his family, but he has problems like the cat messing up his room. He solved the problem by leaving the cat outside. Then his big brother accidentally let the cat go. His big brother jumps over the fence and got the cat. Then he has another problem because he was moving to another country, so he had no other choice and gives the cat to his cousin.

By: Ruby

Ruby — Sat, 11 Apr 2009 04:23:50 +0000

Hi, Ms.Mongno.
In my story, the main point is that my main character
(Pete) wants to make friends in the new state and school, but the new school’s students think Pete doesn’t know about them, and say they just don’t want to be his friends.
My character (Pete) wants to make friends and feels good in his new school.
The problem in my story is that Pete’s father needs to move because his job, and Pete is so sad and kind of angry, but he can’t change the situation, so they move.
The other problem in my story is that Pete wants to make friends, but the students who are in the new school say they don’t want to be his friends.
My character solve the problem is that his neighbor’s kid helps Pete to make the friens in the new school and state, and so Pete gets the friends from his neighbor name Jack.

By: Ayu

Ayu — Fri, 10 Apr 2009 10:47:02 +0000

Hi Mrs.Mongno

My main charecter Isabel has alot of friend at school. Her mother is very proud of her grades. And she is quiet famous at school. My other main charecter, Lia is the younger sister. She is startng 1st grade this spring and hopeing for alot of new friend. Lia never had friend before.
The day Lia had her frist day at school didn’t work out that good. She only Knew a friend called Helen who was in the famous group, so mostly Helen doesn’t think bshe is a friend.For days she couldn’t find a goood friend. She was very upset so she trys to now get atiantion from her sister. One of the things she did was to draw on Isabel’s bed room door. But soon Mom got her to ay the truth. But she didn’t thought she got any ationtion from her. So she desided for a another trick. While Lia was thinking Isabel was so mad at her that she also desided have a plan.Isabel took Lia’s favriote doll Molly in Isabel’s closet. Lia got Isabel’s Math Book to her own closet. Isabel ansd Lia complained at Mom on the same day, Mom was mad at each other. She couldn’t beleve they were mean to each other so much. Then Lia told every thing because she felt very bad about Isabel, Lia told every thing honestly to her sister and her Mom. Isabel understud how Lia felt. Lia felt much better, she now knew that she could make friend for sure!

By: Angie

Angie — Wed, 08 Apr 2009 14:28:34 +0000

Dear Ms. Mongno,
This is my realistic fiction stories…(Small bits and parts.)
In my story, my character’s name is Emily. The thing that Emily wants is she wants to have Lucille back as her best friend again. This problem starts when Lucille left Emily and forgets to pick her up at the park. Then Emily was upset, which that makes Lucille also upset too. That is when they start not to stay together, and Lucille makes her own club. For this… the thing that getting in my character (Emily) way is Lucille never forgive Emily of that Emily was upsetting her.
Other problem that my character have is she got teased by Lucille and she started to felt bad as her friend start to teased her even more, and as the word gets more stronger.
First my character (Emily) was so shocked, and then when she can’t hold it anymore she wrote a letter to Lucille…
Friends is Friends,
But the thing that will never change is our
Friendship…
But when it‘s up to hear now
I would like to say ’sorry’ to you…
SORRY!!!
Finally Lucille tears ran off down her face, she wiped and sorry to Emily as well too. At last Lucille invites her to her club and they become best friend again.