Fascinating Fiction Stories
You are all writing your own realistic fiction stories. You know that in stories the main character really wants something and that problems arise that get in the way of the character getting all that he or she wants. The problem gets worse and worse and then more problems occur that the character has to deal with.These problems or struggles the character has and how he or she deals with them is what keeps your reader hooked and want to continue reading.
You have mapped out your stories on a story mountain. Please briefly share with us the main points on your story mountain. What does your character want? What gets in the way of your character getting what he or she wants. What other problems does your character have? How does he or she struggle to solve the problems?
And finally, how will the problem/s be resolved?
Be sure and write your response in a word document first so that you may revise and use the spell check, then copy and paste it into our blog.
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The first problem in my story is that Cary (my character) has to move away because of her dad’s job. Of course, she really misses her best friend Cindy, but there is no choice for her. She has to follow her parent’s direction, other wise they need to have a long talk. So she went to the airport and got on the plane. More she thinks about her best friend Cindy or Japan, the water falls to her cheek.
The next problem is that she has to go to the new school. Not the Japanese school, its international school. She can’t speak English really well so she was feeling nervous. And finally the day came and she have to go to the new school alone because her parents was busy, unpacking the box from Japan. It’s made her feel more loneliness. Of course she didn’t tell it to her parents because then they will get worried.
But then the mean boy named Tony started to teasing her and she couldn’t push herself. So she decided to run away from the school. So she did. Run fast as she can but no one noticed that she was gone………..
But one day she got a new friend named Lily. Lily was nice and helped her in every thing, English science and so and so. Then 1 year past. She could speak English like every other classmate.
Hello, Mrs.Mongno
In my story the main point of the story is nobody wants to be friend with my character (Lincoln) who wants to have more friends. Lincoln is shy and he is not that close with other boys because he is not active. Lincoln tried to sell money with friendship. He is struggling with how to have more friends and being shy. I didn’t determined what is resolution is going to be in my story.
In my story, the main character’s name is Holly. She wants to be a good 5th grade model, but she doesn’t like her reading buddy, Connie. She is really annoying. She doesn’t listen to Holly, does anything she likes, and does bad things to Holly. And unfortunately, Holly can’t speak English really well. Holly wants to be a good model, but how can she be? She can’t speak English well, she has an annoying buddy. For example, Connie stuck her tongue out, and she doesn’t listen to Holly even she is reading a book for Connie! But she realized that it is not good, and she learned from her friend, Katie. Holly starts to talk more often to Connie, so then Connie start to talk more, too. Holly thinks hard about it, so what she thought worked! So the end of the story will going to be that Holly will be a good 5th grade model like her friend, Katie. She didn’t like her reading buddy, Connie, but the end of the story, Holly start to feel like Connie isn’t that bad.
The first problem I have in my story is that my main character Mary can’t let her dad go to work somewhere else. The second problem I have is that Mary cant hold it anymore and nothing she thinks on doing to help doesn’t help her at all.
The third problem I have in my story is that when Mary’s dad call her she didn’t know it was him and everything he told her to do didn’t work even thou it always help. the really big problem in my story was when when Mary didn’t stop crying for really long time. My solution was when Mary took a photo of him and she took it everywhere she go. When Mary’s dad needed to go agine she wasn’t scared and she didn’t care so mach.
Hi Ms. Mongno,
My main character is Amy. The first problem is that Amy’s dad just got fired from his old job and now he has found a very good new job, but his new job is in Thailand so they have to move. The second problem is that Amy gets so mad and she runs away to her best friend’s house Lisa. When Amy’s mom sees that Amy is not at home, she finds out that she is at Lisa’s house. When Amy’s mom finds her she has to pack her bags and say good-by to her family and friends. When Amy sees her new house in Thailand she thinks that she lives in a mansion so the problem gets a little bit better. When she goes to school the next day she doesn’t know anyone and doesn’t have any friends. But in class she gets a partner that starts to talk to her, so the keep talking until it was recess. They hang out at recess and become friends. Amy asks her new friend Katie if she wants to come over and play. And that is how my mountain goes. My character wants to stay home in the US but when she moves to Thailand she wants to have friends that the can hang out with. Amy’s dad gets in the way by getting a new job. Amy’s problems get solved by talking, just hanging out and being herself.
My story is about a girl called Maria who is going to the girls rugby training camp. She really wants to stay home with her parents because she never left her parents and go somewhere alone. The problem gets worth because she was send to the camp. Problems get more worth because when she alive at camp stadium, she did not had any friend in her small group, and she was afraid to speak up. She wasn’t a bright girl like the others, so nobody spoke to her or helped her. Maria was good at rugby so, she challenged her self to be a better player and finally she become a most famous kids in camp. By challenging her self to be a better player, she got many new friends.
Dear Ms. Mongno,
This is my realistic fiction stories…(Small bits and parts.)
In my story, my character’s name is Emily. The thing that Emily wants is she wants to have Lucille back as her best friend again. This problem starts when Lucille left Emily and forgets to pick her up at the park. Then Emily was upset, which that makes Lucille also upset too. That is when they start not to stay together, and Lucille makes her own club. For this… the thing that getting in my character (Emily) way is Lucille never forgive Emily of that Emily was upsetting her.
Other problem that my character have is she got teased by Lucille and she started to felt bad as her friend start to teased her even more, and as the word gets more stronger.
First my character (Emily) was so shocked, and then when she can’t hold it anymore she wrote a letter to Lucille…
Friends is Friends,
But the thing that will never change is our
Friendship…
But when it‘s up to hear now
I would like to say ’sorry’ to you…
SORRY!!!
Finally Lucille tears ran off down her face, she wiped and sorry to Emily as well too. At last Lucille invites her to her club and they become best friend again.
Hi Mrs.Mongno
My main charecter Isabel has alot of friend at school. Her mother is very proud of her grades. And she is quiet famous at school. My other main charecter, Lia is the younger sister. She is startng 1st grade this spring and hopeing for alot of new friend. Lia never had friend before.
The day Lia had her frist day at school didn’t work out that good. She only Knew a friend called Helen who was in the famous group, so mostly Helen doesn’t think bshe is a friend.For days she couldn’t find a goood friend. She was very upset so she trys to now get atiantion from her sister. One of the things she did was to draw on Isabel’s bed room door. But soon Mom got her to ay the truth. But she didn’t thought she got any ationtion from her. So she desided for a another trick. While Lia was thinking Isabel was so mad at her that she also desided have a plan.Isabel took Lia’s favriote doll Molly in Isabel’s closet. Lia got Isabel’s Math Book to her own closet. Isabel ansd Lia complained at Mom on the same day, Mom was mad at each other. She couldn’t beleve they were mean to each other so much. Then Lia told every thing because she felt very bad about Isabel, Lia told every thing honestly to her sister and her Mom. Isabel understud how Lia felt. Lia felt much better, she now knew that she could make friend for sure!
Hi, Ms.Mongno.
In my story, the main point is that my main character
(Pete) wants to make friends in the new state and school, but the new school’s students think Pete doesn’t know about them, and say they just don’t want to be his friends.
My character (Pete) wants to make friends and feels good in his new school.
The problem in my story is that Pete’s father needs to move because his job, and Pete is so sad and kind of angry, but he can’t change the situation, so they move.
The other problem in my story is that Pete wants to make friends, but the students who are in the new school say they don’t want to be his friends.
My character solve the problem is that his neighbor’s kid helps Pete to make the friens in the new school and state, and so Pete gets the friends from his neighbor name Jack.
My character (Duke) wants the cat to stay with his family, but he has problems like the cat messing up his room. He solved the problem by leaving the cat outside. Then his big brother accidentally let the cat go. His big brother jumps over the fence and got the cat. Then he has another problem because he was moving to another country, so he had no other choice and gives the cat to his cousin.
Hello, Ms.Mongno.
The problem my main character(Arine) is facing is that she loses her lucky stone
and she couldn’t find it. It made her feel despair and she couldn’t
concentrate on anything like she got detention on math because she didn’t concentrate on math class because she lost it.
The other problem my main character is facing is that when she found her stone again, her enemy (Smith) threw it away so she got worse again.
Her grade got down and her stress got up.
She solved this problem by going to the counseler and ask her about her stone
and she can’t concentrate on anything except for looking for her stone
and the counseler told her that she could do anything without her stone
and she got better!
In my story, the main character is Dong-Gill. Dong-Gill moved to Seoul.
And he’s speaking different accent (Busan accent), so everyone didn’t come
close him. And he spoiled water to leader of boys, Joon-Pyo and he got
mad about it. But Don-Gill meets street-sweeper and he helps Dong-Gill to
get through.
My character wants to have (make) friends to talk with and play with.
And also he wants to learn Seoul accent because he knows
that If he wants to have friends, he has to learn Seoul accent.
And also he wants to be friend with
street-sweeper forever.
And Dong-Gill solves the problem to learn Seoul accent and
when class learn about other area, he taught about Busan so
everyone knew that he is kind.
My story is about a girl named Isabell. Isabell
is old enough to go to school, so her mom said
you need to go to school. In school everyone is
jealous because she is rich.
She has no friends.
My character wants a friend to play with.
So a girl moved into her neighborhood and
Isabell went and said hello and their
friendship begins.
My story is about this boy called John who came to the Maldives and in there he met with his friend. He is scared of the ocean and when he was in the Maldives his fear came out. His friend Ken asked if John wants to snorkel with him. But John couldn’t answer. He didn’t want anyone to know that he is scared of the ocean and that he can’t swim. But because his hotel was on the water he tries him self to go in and swim. He didn’t want anyone to know what he was doing him self. But his fear came out again by the small wave made him go far away from home. After that he get noticed by Ken. They practiced everday. and that made him go in the water.
Dear Mrs. M.
I think that this blog post is a little too short but that’s Ok right?
My book is about a girl name Laura and she had trouble fitting in and also she is very shy and that make her talk less in class. So then, she talk about it with her mom and her mom gave her some advice and then the problem get solve and the after that, there was a new girl in class and then they became best friend.
Hi, Ms.Mongno.
My story is about a boy called Kota has had strange experience that every time new student came in this year, there names are Kazuki and he always came to be friends with them.
The problem Kota faces is that the new student who Kota thought a boy was a girl. And he starts to concern about the new student (kazuki) but one day the leader of the girls (Kanako) made Kazuki left out of the girls group. Kota would liked to help her but he couldn’t talk to her. One day Kota knew her sad experience…