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		<title>By: TJ</title>
		<link>http://ESL5.edublogs.org/2009/03/01/poetry-favorites/comment-page-1/#comment-429</link>
		<dc:creator>TJ</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Jun 2009 05:25:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>HI Ms.Mongno
This is my favorite poem

Sometime boring, sometime fun.
Funny and fun.
Get some armor, get some gold.
Really fun when you are a member.
My friends play my friends plays. 
He has a rune plate body.
He likes to play Runescape very much.
I’m different I don’t have rune plate body, but I have adamant.
Adamant, adamant look like poison because it’s green.
Two of my friends have rune body and dragon.
Rune it’s light blue.
Dragon, dragon, and dragon it’s really red, really red.  
Also only for members.
I wish I were a member</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>HI Ms.Mongno<br />
This is my favorite poem</p>
<p>Sometime boring, sometime fun.<br />
Funny and fun.<br />
Get some armor, get some gold.<br />
Really fun when you are a member.<br />
My friends play my friends plays.<br />
He has a rune plate body.<br />
He likes to play Runescape very much.<br />
I’m different I don’t have rune plate body, but I have adamant.<br />
Adamant, adamant look like poison because it’s green.<br />
Two of my friends have rune body and dragon.<br />
Rune it’s light blue.<br />
Dragon, dragon, and dragon it’s really red, really red.<br />
Also only for members.<br />
I wish I were a member</p>
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		<title>By: Kodai</title>
		<link>http://ESL5.edublogs.org/2009/03/01/poetry-favorites/comment-page-1/#comment-425</link>
		<dc:creator>Kodai</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 27 May 2009 03:36:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi, Ms. Mongno
This is my favorite poem.


Say Good Bye
When I say good-bye,
I couldn’t feel anything.
I still couldn’t believe he’ll leave here tomorrow
Why do I have to separate?
When I remember him,
My one-drop of tears come out from my eyes</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, Ms. Mongno<br />
This is my favorite poem.</p>
<p>Say Good Bye<br />
When I say good-bye,<br />
I couldn’t feel anything.<br />
I still couldn’t believe he’ll leave here tomorrow<br />
Why do I have to separate?<br />
When I remember him,<br />
My one-drop of tears come out from my eyes</p>
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		<title>By: Ofir</title>
		<link>http://ESL5.edublogs.org/2009/03/01/poetry-favorites/comment-page-1/#comment-421</link>
		<dc:creator>Ofir</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 25 May 2009 07:53:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi every one, this is my favorite poem because i really like flowers and they are pretty 

&quot;Flowers
By Ofir
Sun, rain, water, bees
Smooth petals, fruits, sweet and pink
Wind, colors, red green&quot;

this was kind of hard for me to write because i couldn&#039;t find many words for flowers. :) :( :O</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi every one, this is my favorite poem because i really like flowers and they are pretty </p>
<p>&#8220;Flowers<br />
By Ofir<br />
Sun, rain, water, bees<br />
Smooth petals, fruits, sweet and pink<br />
Wind, colors, red green&#8221;</p>
<p>this was kind of hard for me to write because i couldn&#8217;t find many words for flowers. <img src='http://ESL5.edublogs.org/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  <img src='http://ESL5.edublogs.org/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_sad.gif' alt=':(' class='wp-smiley' />  :O</p>
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		<title>By: kentaro227</title>
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		<dc:creator>kentaro227</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 18 May 2009 13:52:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi
I chose this poem

Goal Keeper
Kentaro

In
The
Goal
Waiting for a ball	
Jump
Catch
Saving a team
He is like a
Super hero
That saves our
team
I like this poem because this is about my friend called Harry who really did save our team. Also othere poem doesn&#039;t talk about person I know so this poem was kind of special.This is easy to write because I can just go back and remember what had happened.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi<br />
I chose this poem</p>
<p>Goal Keeper<br />
Kentaro</p>
<p>In<br />
The<br />
Goal<br />
Waiting for a ball<br />
Jump<br />
Catch<br />
Saving a team<br />
He is like a<br />
Super hero<br />
That saves our<br />
team<br />
I like this poem because this is about my friend called Harry who really did save our team. Also othere poem doesn&#8217;t talk about person I know so this poem was kind of special.This is easy to write because I can just go back and remember what had happened.</p>
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		<title>By: Ruby</title>
		<link>http://ESL5.edublogs.org/2009/03/01/poetry-favorites/comment-page-1/#comment-370</link>
		<dc:creator>Ruby</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Mar 2009 04:11:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi!Ms.Mongno,
my favorite poem is &quot;The Wind&quot;:

Who has seen the wind?
Neither you nor I;
But when the leaves hang trembling,
The wind is passing through.
Who has seen the wind?
Neither I nor you;
But when the trees bow down their heads,
The wind is passing by.

This is my favorite poem because when I was reading this poem, I was relax, and also this poem had used repetion.
I think this poem is easy to write, because I can imagine the pictures in my head.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi!Ms.Mongno,<br />
my favorite poem is &#8220;The Wind&#8221;:</p>
<p>Who has seen the wind?<br />
Neither you nor I;<br />
But when the leaves hang trembling,<br />
The wind is passing through.<br />
Who has seen the wind?<br />
Neither I nor you;<br />
But when the trees bow down their heads,<br />
The wind is passing by.</p>
<p>This is my favorite poem because when I was reading this poem, I was relax, and also this poem had used repetion.<br />
I think this poem is easy to write, because I can imagine the pictures in my head.</p>
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		<title>By: Soohyun</title>
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		<dc:creator>Soohyun</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Mar 2009 01:40:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Mrs. Mongno!
My FAVORITE POEMS are... 

PARADISE 
Mild and warm paradise.
Accompany and friendship.
Glitter like a star.
Marvelous like the Milky Way.
Fragrant and aromatic like a lily. 

Lonely Rose
I&#039;m a rose,
Beautiful Rose.
I have beautiful 
Reddish soft petals
With yellow inside
And a green stem
With thorns.

Everyone is saying
I&#039;m the best flower, in the world.
But no-one comes to me.

I have thorns to 
Protect myself.
But I&#039;m lonely...
Everyone is not coming...
They&#039;ll never come...

I think that two poems are my favorite 
because I was interesting about rose and 
paradise and it took long time to got 
idea and also I revised them many times,
And I think revising took me to good accomplishment.
And  when I read poem, &#039;PARADISE&#039; it makes me
feel comfortable and calm.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Mrs. Mongno!<br />
My FAVORITE POEMS are&#8230; </p>
<p>PARADISE<br />
Mild and warm paradise.<br />
Accompany and friendship.<br />
Glitter like a star.<br />
Marvelous like the Milky Way.<br />
Fragrant and aromatic like a lily. </p>
<p>Lonely Rose<br />
I&#8217;m a rose,<br />
Beautiful Rose.<br />
I have beautiful<br />
Reddish soft petals<br />
With yellow inside<br />
And a green stem<br />
With thorns.</p>
<p>Everyone is saying<br />
I&#8217;m the best flower, in the world.<br />
But no-one comes to me.</p>
<p>I have thorns to<br />
Protect myself.<br />
But I&#8217;m lonely&#8230;<br />
Everyone is not coming&#8230;<br />
They&#8217;ll never come&#8230;</p>
<p>I think that two poems are my favorite<br />
because I was interesting about rose and<br />
paradise and it took long time to got<br />
idea and also I revised them many times,<br />
And I think revising took me to good accomplishment.<br />
And  when I read poem, &#8216;PARADISE&#8217; it makes me<br />
feel comfortable and calm.</p>
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		<title>By: Jungmeen</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jungmeen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Mar 2009 01:40:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hello, Ms.Mongno!
This is my favorite poem. It&#039;s called Predator and Prey.

I’m the Smartest, 
fastest, 
cutest, 
most squeakiest 
and cheese eating mouse in the world!
You can’t catch me
You stupid cat 
You can’t catch me
You stupid cat

I’m the Bravest,
Courageous, 
swiftest, 
smartest 
and most speedy cat in the world!
You can’t run away from me
You dumb mouse
You can’t run away from me
You dumb mouse!

AND… GULP!

I used alliteration, which is I&#039;m the... You can&#039;t...
Also, this is my favorite poem because I could write this one
really easy and also it is fun to reread my poem and revise something.
Well, I was trying to change all the things in my poem, but actually
I had no alliteration in my poem, so I just added some alliteration
and that was all of my revising poem.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello, Ms.Mongno!<br />
This is my favorite poem. It&#8217;s called Predator and Prey.</p>
<p>I’m the Smartest,<br />
fastest,<br />
cutest,<br />
most squeakiest<br />
and cheese eating mouse in the world!<br />
You can’t catch me<br />
You stupid cat<br />
You can’t catch me<br />
You stupid cat</p>
<p>I’m the Bravest,<br />
Courageous,<br />
swiftest,<br />
smartest<br />
and most speedy cat in the world!<br />
You can’t run away from me<br />
You dumb mouse<br />
You can’t run away from me<br />
You dumb mouse!</p>
<p>AND… GULP!</p>
<p>I used alliteration, which is I&#8217;m the&#8230; You can&#8217;t&#8230;<br />
Also, this is my favorite poem because I could write this one<br />
really easy and also it is fun to reread my poem and revise something.<br />
Well, I was trying to change all the things in my poem, but actually<br />
I had no alliteration in my poem, so I just added some alliteration<br />
and that was all of my revising poem.</p>
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		<title>By: Sunny</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sunny</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 09 Mar 2009 22:44:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi, miss. Mongno
My favorite poem is Haiku. Here is the poem. It calls giant panda.


Eating the bam-boo
Getting fatter and fatter
Sleeping on the ground


This is my favorite poem because it is easy top write and different from the other poem like they have rhyme but haiku has a beat. I come up with this poem because I had written a lot of Haiku. I had figurative that talks about giant panda.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, miss. Mongno<br />
My favorite poem is Haiku. Here is the poem. It calls giant panda.</p>
<p>Eating the bam-boo<br />
Getting fatter and fatter<br />
Sleeping on the ground</p>
<p>This is my favorite poem because it is easy top write and different from the other poem like they have rhyme but haiku has a beat. I come up with this poem because I had written a lot of Haiku. I had figurative that talks about giant panda.</p>
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		<title>By: Angie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Angie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 08 Mar 2009 14:52:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Howdy Ms. Mongno 
Here, is my favorite poem….

Chocolate Latte,
Taste of a fluffy,
Smooth,
Of it…
Topping with rainbow,
Chocolate Latte,
Yum! Yum!
Whip cream…
Cherry…
My favorite of all!

This is my favorite poem because, first of all this poem makes me tasted well, such as Chocolate Latte which is my favorite. This poem it suddenly popped up into my head since when I remember the taste of fon-due at Swensen. This poem is quite not hard cause when I start to think it popped into my head everytime.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Howdy Ms. Mongno<br />
Here, is my favorite poem….</p>
<p>Chocolate Latte,<br />
Taste of a fluffy,<br />
Smooth,<br />
Of it…<br />
Topping with rainbow,<br />
Chocolate Latte,<br />
Yum! Yum!<br />
Whip cream…<br />
Cherry…<br />
My favorite of all!</p>
<p>This is my favorite poem because, first of all this poem makes me tasted well, such as Chocolate Latte which is my favorite. This poem it suddenly popped up into my head since when I remember the taste of fon-due at Swensen. This poem is quite not hard cause when I start to think it popped into my head everytime.</p>
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		<title>By: malou</title>
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		<dc:creator>malou</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 05 Mar 2009 11:27:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Ms.Mongno,
This poem is a free verse it is called funny mommy
It was sunny 
When my mommy
Ate my bunny
So my mommy
Turned into my bunny
And my bunny
Turned into my mommy
It wasn’t funny
Because my mommy
Ate my money
And some honey
I thought she was a mummy
But she was my bunny 
This is my favorite poem because it is funny and I like the way I made all the ending words rime.
I wrote this story in my writing journal at school. I didn’t know what to write, so I found some riming words and then I made the poem in my head. And I thought it sounded pretty good so I wrote it in my journal. I also added some small details. This poem was very easy to write, because it was simple and didn’t have  hard words in it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Ms.Mongno,<br />
This poem is a free verse it is called funny mommy<br />
It was sunny<br />
When my mommy<br />
Ate my bunny<br />
So my mommy<br />
Turned into my bunny<br />
And my bunny<br />
Turned into my mommy<br />
It wasn’t funny<br />
Because my mommy<br />
Ate my money<br />
And some honey<br />
I thought she was a mummy<br />
But she was my bunny<br />
This is my favorite poem because it is funny and I like the way I made all the ending words rime.<br />
I wrote this story in my writing journal at school. I didn’t know what to write, so I found some riming words and then I made the poem in my head. And I thought it sounded pretty good so I wrote it in my journal. I also added some small details. This poem was very easy to write, because it was simple and didn’t have  hard words in it.</p>
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