Catch’em Leads!

We are working hard on our fiction stories! We have written serveral leads, choosen one and now we are continuing to revise it. Why? Because we want to “hook” our readers and make our beginnings so interesting that they will want to keep on reading!
Share the lead that you have written so far. After you write your lead, comment on what you have done in your lead to make it really interesting. Have you used dialogue, or small actions? Have you included setting details so the reader knows where your story in happening?

How have you “hooked” us?